Thứ Bảy, 19 tháng 12, 2009

Opinion Essay

Topic : What do you think about negative lifestyle of young generation nowadays ?


recently a lot of newspapers and medias have criticized negative lifestyle, increasing in serious crime of young generation in Vietnam. These situations have made most people shocked and worried about their children. This case is also a tight problem for authority in handling. Young generation has chosen a negative lifestyle for themself. I agree with this comment.


Why does young generation nowadays have a negative lifestyle? To explain for this situation, i will give some cases: As you know, nowadays our life is inundated with a wide variety of media. With unlimited access to the Internet, television and foreign magazines, teenager are more opposed to Western lifestyle than ever. Especially, the movies have affect the way teenager act and think. They make dress, cut hair like stars movie's lifestyle. Besides, young people are addicted to internet through online games, videos, music, forum...that could take much time of studying or working. It is very harmful. Moreover, most of teenagers are interested in their study but some of them don't care. They rush into drug addiction. So, the parents should spend more time to take care of their children better. Co-habitate situation is becoming popular among the youth of today for they have been influenced by western lifestyle. They want to live together to understand. As a result, the female get pregnant. Following information from the internet, the rate of abortion is quite high in the world. This problem causes the parents and authority worried.


Modern life has a positive and negative effect. The positive effect in many aspects, transportation, economic, etc...On the other hand, the negative effect has exerted a great influence upon the pattern of human interaction. That the reason why many youths have a negative lifestyle nowadays.

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