Topic: The character of a person I admired.
Overtime, there have been several people who have influenced various aspect of my life, based on their personal characteristics, accomplishments, intelligence, etc...such as: my teachers, artists, political leaders. However, in my heart, the person I admire most is my father. My father is the most important person in my life.
My father is the one who raised me, looked after me, showed me the right way, gave me advices, supported me, and did many things for me. I admire him for many reasons. He is a generous person, a strong-willed and a supportive man. He loves and care for others, works hard in life and help those who are in need. My father is a very kind-hearted. He is the most lovingand caring person I have ever seen. He loves us and wants us to be the best. He tell us what is righ, what is wrong. When we make a mistake, he never shouts at us but he tells us that it is wrong and we shoud fix it, and not repeat it again. My father treats people around him with kindness and love. There is allways a big smile on his face.
My father is a very strong-willed person who confronted with obstacles would greet them as a challenge to be succeeded. Moreover, my father is a supportive man. He likes to help anyone seeking for any kind of help whether he knows the person or not. He never minds helping my mother with the housework. For instance, he helps in washing the dishes, cooking some meals, and cleaning the house
My father allways encourages us to do better in our life. He teaches us many meaningful lessons in life. He teaches us how to become a good person in society. My father allways is the most important person in all my life.
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